Book Review - Build a Girlfriend by Elba Luz

 

Build a Girlfriend by Elba Luz is about a young woman, Amelia Hernandez, who was recently dumped and her subsequent ploy to become the ultimate girlfriend.  Amelia was excited to see her girlfriend until she was unexpectedly dumped right after Amelia confessed her feelings to her.  Amelia feels that her family curse caused her relationship to dissolve. The rumor is that every romantic relationship that a Hernandez woman is in will eventually end. Amelia’s sisters, mom, and aunts seem to be okay with the curse and have accepted it, but Amelia wants to be in a relationship and wants to break the curse for herself.

Amelia feels that she is the reason why her relationship doesn’t work. She is determined to find a way to fix the issue. Together with her sisters, mother, and aunts, they hatch a plan for Amelia to re-date her exes and figure out where she went wrong and how she can become the perfect girlfriend. Unfortunately, her plan hits a snag when she is reunited with Leon. Leon was the ex that Amelia is still not over. She decides the best way to get over Leon is to show him the perfect girlfriend she is and break his heart in the process.

The book was an okay read, but it was much longer than it needed to be, as well as boring and repetitive at times. There were too many characters and they felt one-dimensional. The book was very predictable and had all the common romance tropes. Amelia was hard to understand and like as a character. She could be fun at times, but then she did some silly things out of nowhere. I did like the family dynamics between the different characters and enjoyed reading those parts. I think if the novel had been edited down and fine-tuned, I would have enjoyed it more.